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The graph below shows the employment of women between 16 and 65 years old in five countries from 2003 to 2009.
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起头段
The line graph illustrates changes in the percentage of employed females across five countries (the UK, Canada, Germany, Chile and Turkey) between 2003 and 2009.
概述段
Overall, the UKconsistently had the highest proportionof women in employment,whileTurkeyrecorded the lowest.Additionally, women in Germanyexperienced the most notable growthin labor force participation during the given period.
念念路要点：
- UK数值一直最高，Turkey数值一直最低
- Germany数值变化幅度最大
Body paragraph 1
In 2003, 80% of women in the UK were employed.Aftera marginal growth to85% in 2007, this figurereturned to its original levelof 80% in 2009.By contrast, Canada’s employment ratesaw a slight declinefrom 70% in 2003 to 65% in 2005,beforerising steadily to75% by 2009.Althoughjust half of German women were employed in 2003,there was a significant increase to65% six years later.
念念路要点：
- UK：2003年为80%→随后小小幅度上涨到2007年达到85%→随后到2009年回落至80%
- Canada：2003年到2005年小幅度下落(70%到65%)→到2009年连续上涨到75%
- Germany：2003年数据为50%→随后显贵上涨到2009年达到65%
Body paragraph 2
In comparison to the UK,female workforce participation in the other two countriesremained lower.Specifically, Chilewitnessed a gradual rise, with the percentage ofemployed womengrowingfrom 40% in 2003 to 50% by 2009.Conversely, in Turkey, the employment ratehalved to10% in the first four years,followed bya modest increase to15% by 2009.
念念路要点：其余两个国度数据较低
- Chile：2003年到2009年冉冉上涨，从40%上涨到50%
- Turkey：2003到2007年数据减半到10%→随后小幅度上涨到2009年达到15%
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